Sorry, everyone — this one’s on me.
I’ve been pushing the Stories through a bit too quickly, and the accuracy has suffered. When I put the scanned Mackintosh Society PDFs into the new format, some paragraphs ended up in the wrong order and there were misspellings and other slips. That isn’t the standard I want for this board, and I apologise.
The audio wasn’t much better. I had Ayshea read the chapters and paragraphs and then joined them in Audio Joiner, and it didn’t come out as it should. Sorry about that as well.
I’ve gone back to the original source, added only a few of my own nuances — it is still a past members story story — and set it again properly. Please have a look at Temptation of Eve when you get a chance.